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Spiritual Stone title

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:)I'm a non-native English speaker. So maybe my English in the comic will be sometime wrong. Excuse me. :)

Critiques


:icondarkobsession86:
This is my first critique, but I will do my best. Also, I am only speaking of this single image, not the comic. I think the humanization of the wolves is very clever, using clothes and expressive eyes. The pectorial muscles on the Alpha wolf seem a bit much to me, but that might be a personal opinion. The image itself is very well rendered and I think your style works well with what you were doing. My only suggestion would be to find a different font for the title. That one really clashes with the image and font needs to accent the image, not detract from me. (Thank you typography class.)
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:iconlycanscar:
Oh my... Lovely, outstanding, gorgeous, and awesome mate... I can't wait to read it... ^.^

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Woof!!! Chill and live the life of night. Party till you drop.

I can be any animal in either feral or anthro form. That is what a were-beast is!
:iconnaruto-girl:
this is amazing :clap:

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,,::Foolish little brother...


Foxy Foxy Foxy..!!!!

I Love You! :heart: :blowkiss:
:iconobtrageous:
is very nice and professional!

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:star::star::star: Obtrageous' fab gallery: visit it at [link] :star::star::star:
:iconstarlesswolf:
wow cool! I want to read it!

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Life is more beautiful then a piece of art
:icondersheltie:
Thank you. ^_^

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I like training Kendo. I'm sure Kendo is a noble martial art. :)
:icondersheltie:
Thank you. ^_^

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I like training Kendo. I'm sure Kendo is a noble martial art. :)
:icondersheltie:
Thank you. ^_^

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I like training Kendo. I'm sure Kendo is a noble martial art. :)
:icondersheltie:
Thank you. ^_^

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I like training Kendo. I'm sure Kendo is a noble martial art. :)
:iconlycanscar:
You're much welcome mate...

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Woof!!! Chill and live the life of night. Party till you drop.

I can be any animal in either feral or anthro form. That is what a were-beast is!
:iconmarizka-san:
Great artwork. ^^

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I hope you understand my English. ': o

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